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I recall you being respectful and patient after I delivered two reviews for you in the past; I will take this article on now as part of the GAN drive! --K. Peake 13:18, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"appeared in January 2003." → "was released in January 2003."
The last two sentences of this para should come directly after this one instead
"Initial touring to promote the album consisted" → "Initial accompanying tours for promotion consisted" and this belongs as the second sentence of the second para in the new order
"in the US and the UK" → "in the United States and the United Kingdom"
"The band also appeared at" → "The band later appeared on" and this should still follow the other tour sentence in the new order
"The album's title-track was released as a radio single in" → "The title-track "What Is It to Burn" was released as the lead single in" with the appropriate wikilink
"by "Letters to You" in April." → "by the single "Letters to You" in April of that year." with the appropriate target
"Double A-sided single "New Beginnings"/"What It Is to Burn" was released in August." → ""New Beginnings"/"What It Is to Burn" was released as the third and final single on a double A-side in August 2003."
Move the chart positions of the singles to being here, though they may be ordered more afterwards
"primarily a pop punk/emo release," → "primarily a pop punk and emo release," with the target
"is also classed as" → "was also classed as"
"It received a positive reaction from" → "The album received generally positive reviews from"
"with many finding it an enjoyable listen." → "being found as an enjoyable listen by many."
"The album charted at number 99 on the Billboard 200 in the US and at number 177 in the UK." → "On the US Billboard 200, What It Is to Burn charted at number 99, while it reached number 177 on the UK Albums Chart." with the wikilink and this should begin a third para
"album sales stood at over 400,000 copies." → "the album has sold over 400,000 copies worldwide."
"charted on the UK top 40 singles chart," → "charted at number 39 on the UK Singles Chart," with the wikilink
"the top 40 on the" → "the top 40 of the US"
"The album has since been" → "It has since been"
"the emo/post-hardcore scene." → "the emo and post-hardcore scenes."
"The band went on a" → "Finch embarked on a"
"tour for the album in 2013 through" → "tour in 2013 across"
"was released as a radio single[37]" → "was released to radio stations across the United States as the lead single from What Is It to Burn,[37]" with the wikilink
"the track[12] with director Alexander Kosta." → "the track,[12] which was directed by Alexander Kosta.
"on February 21, 2003." → "on February 12, 2003."
"In March, Punknews.org held" → "In March of that year, Punknews.org held"
"On April 22, "Letters to You" was released as a single." → "On April 22, 2003, "Letters to You" was released on CD as What Is It to Burn's second single." with the targets
"and "Letters to You"." → "and "Letters to You" as bonus tracks."
"Following this," → "Following on from this,"
"as a double A-sided single on August 25." → "on a double A-sided as the album's third and final single on August 25, 2003." with the target
The April 2003 figures should be in the sentence after the first instead
"It also charted at number 177 in the UK. "Letters to You" charted in the UK at number 39." → "It charted at number 177 on the UK Albums Chart, while "Letters to You" reached number 39 on the UK Singles Chart." with the wikilinks
"charted at number 15 on the" → "peaked at number 15 on the US"
[75] should be solely at the end of the sentence before [76]
"the album had sold over 400,000 copies." → "What It Is to Burn had sold over 400,000 copies worldwide."
Rankings should be at the start of the second para
"included the album's title-track on their list" → "included "What It Is to Burn" at number 47 on their list" since otherwise it sounds like an unordered list
"said the album was" → "said What It Is to Burn was"
"leading the genre" → "noting it for leading the genre"
"In 2013, the group" → "In 2013, Finch"
"It was initially" → "The celebration was initially"
"released a live/video album from this tour" → "released a live video album of the anniversary celebrations"
"The album has been" → "What It Is to Burn has been"
Yeepsi Did some minor copy editing, but I am very impressed with you quick response rate and how great the work itself is! ✓Pass time. --K. Peake 07:02, 10 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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On hold until the issues are fixed, though I suspect you should go through this quite well. --K. Peake 16:42, 9 October 2020 (UTC)