Talk:King David
I made a change in the "David Fighting against Israel" section that originally read:
"[...] he was sent back to Ziklag, which he found to his dismay may had been pillaged and burnt during his brief absence."
to the following:
"[...] he was sent back to Ziklag, which he found to his dismay had been pillaged and burnt during his brief absence."
But I am not sure if the author may have meant something different such as:
"[...] he was sent back to Ziklag, which he found, to his dismay, may have been pillaged and burnt during his brief absence."
In fact, the change I made may need a comma after dismay also.
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