Wikipedia:Peer review/Colonization of the Moon/archive1
Colonization of the Moon[edit]
This page discusses the possibilities and issues for putting a human colony on the Moon. What else do you think needs to be included or improved in order to turn this into a feature-quality article? Thank you. — RJH 22:09, 14 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- History section reads more like a timeline. It would be better if a paragraph or two is written there linking to a timeline article. -- Sundar (talk · contribs) 06:07, Apr 15, 2005 (UTC)
- Move external links from main body, preferably by Wikipedia:Footnotes use. Transform bulleted sections into normal text paragraphs. Go over and ilink terms - many are not connected with their articles (for example, habitat). Since this is still a theory, and popular in fiction, the fiction section should be expanded. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 10:28, 15 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- Okay, question: Are the advantages and disadvantages listed in any articles? Because it would be nice if the source article(s) were listed either before the two lists or after. --Jb-adder 01:15, 13 May 2005 (UTC)