Wikipedia:Peer review/Funeral of Pope John Paul II/archive1

Funeral of Pope John Paul II[edit]

The article is very clear, with lots of pictures and text. All of the requirements for a FA are there, and I think that Gerald Farinas and others have done a great job. It covers the entire ceremony, which is probably going to be a real important historical event. Bratsche^{talk random} 21:07, Apr 12, 2005 (UTC)

I am astonished at the breadth and depth of this article, written so quickly after the actual event. Only the internet community and the Wikipedia editing process could create something, as beautifully composed as this article, in so short a time. Thank you all of you.

Note: Comment was made by user 172.153.159.122. Bratsche^{talk random} 20:37, Apr 13, 2005 (UTC)

~~Having the whole homily here is likely a bad idea. That is what Wikisource is for. An abridged summary along with background would be better.~~ Also, where are the inline citations? An FA requirement is to use them appropriately. None is not appropriate, IMO. They should be used after every quote and after every fact that will likely be disputable. Not having any makes confirming the information in an article this size needlessly difficult. --mav 16:21, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Summarized homily, and kept a final quote from Cardinal Ratzinger. Bratsche^{talk random} 19:53, Apr 17, 2005 (UTC)