Talk:Mikoyan-Gurevich DIS

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Mikoyan-Gurevich DIS has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
December 1, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 25, 2009.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Soviet Mikoyan-Gurevich DIS prototype of the early 1940s had an electrically operated variable-incidence horizontal stabilizer?

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Reviewer: The Bushranger (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
A few grammar smoothings are required - for instance, "with service designation MiG-5 was reserved" is rather awkward. The Russian words defining OKO should be italicised, for two examples. Also, the "design and development" section should be subdivided, I believe - the flight testing should be in a seperate section/subsection.
All done, I believe.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:13, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
References are accurate and reliable, without OR. While technically meeting the requirement I think the long paragraphs shouldn't be cited just at the end - it's an invitation for later additions to "pretend" to be referenced.
My articles may be hijacked later on, but I'll take that risk.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:13, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Fair enough.
It is broad in its coverage.
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Placing this on hold while the above comments are addressed. The Bushranger _{One ping only} 01:28, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Good to go. Nice work. - The Bushranger _{One ping only} 05:21, 1 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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