Wikipedia:Peer review/War elephant/archive1

War elephant

Yes, the FA and recent main-page feature. It's a mess; poorly sectioned, rambling narrative, not quite long enough for such a riveting subject -- no meaty details about uses in any of the great elephant campaigns, though it touches on many. No deep discussion of the differences between the kinds of elephants mentioned, nor links to biology/species articles... other comments welcome. Up for FA status review. +sj+ 20:13, 10 Aug 2004 (UTC)