Talk:Irruputuncu

Irruputuncu has been listed as one of the Geography and places good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 28, 2016. (Reviewed version).

This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale.
It is of interest to the following WikiProjects:

Volcanoes Mid‑importance

	Volcanoes portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Volcanoes, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of volcanoes, volcanology, igneous petrology, and related subjects on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.VolcanoesWikipedia:WikiProject VolcanoesTemplate:WikiProject VolcanoesWikiProject Volcanoes articles
Mid	This article has been rated as Mid-importance on the project's importance scale.

Mountains Low‑importance

	Mountains portal This article is part of WikiProject Mountains, a project to systematically present information on mountains. If you would like to participate, you can choose to edit the article attached to this page (see Contributing FAQ for more information), or visit the project page where you can join the project and/or contribute to the discussion.MountainsWikipedia:WikiProject MountainsTemplate:WikiProject MountainsMountain articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	An editor has requested that an image or photograph be added to this article.

South America: Bolivia Low‑importance

	Latin America portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject South America, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to South America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.South AmericaWikipedia:WikiProject South AmericaTemplate:WikiProject South AmericaSouth America articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by WikiProject Bolivia (assessed as Low-importance).

Chile

	Chile portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Chile, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Chile on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.ChileWikipedia:WikiProject ChileTemplate:WikiProject ChileChile articles
???	This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.

Geography Low‑importance

This article is within the scope of WikiProject Geography, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of geography on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.GeographyWikipedia:WikiProject GeographyTemplate:WikiProject Geographygeography articles

Low This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

WikiProject Geography To-do list:

Here are some tasks awaiting attention:

Article requests : See Requested articles/Social sciences/Geography, cities, regions and named places and Missing articles about Locations
Assess : Tag related article talk pages with {{WikiProject Geography}}. To help assess the quality and importance of geography articles, please see: Unassessed geography articles and Unknown-importance geography articles.
Cleanup : See Geography articles needing attention
Deletion sorting : Listed at Geographic related deletion discussions
Geographical coordinates : See Articles missing geocoordinate data by country
Infobox : See Geography articles needing infoboxes
Map : See Wikipedia requested maps
Notability : See Geography articles with topics of unclear notability
Photo : See Wikipedia requested photographs of places
Stubs : See Geography stubs

Text and/or other creative content from this version of Iru Phutunqu (Chile-Nor Lípez) was copied or moved into Irruputuncu with this edit. The former page's history now serves to provide attribution for that content in the latter page, and it must not be deleted as long as the latter page exists.

The following references may be useful when improving this article in the future:

It is requested that an image or photograph be included in this article to improve its quality. Please replace this template with a more specific media request template where possible.

Wikipedians in the following regions may be able to help:
Bolivia	Chile

The Free Image Search Tool or Openverse Creative Commons Search may be able to locate suitable images on Flickr and other web sites.

Upload

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Irruputuncu/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:52, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

General

No copyvio/dablink/external link issues

Lead

Aymara iru spiny Peruvian feather grass... Potosí Department, Bolivia Is this part mentioned only in the lead? The lead is supposed to be a summary of the main article and not include things excluded from the main article.
The mountain is part of the Andean Central Volcanic Zone (CVZ) Separate this out from the rest of the line

Geography and Geology

No caps needed for "g" of "Geology" in the title
Say "Central Volcanic Zone (CVZ)" at first mention of the phrase (after lead) and try to consistently use "CVZ" throughout afterward
Wikilink ignimbrite
The oldest lava flows on the northern and eastern...around 0.097 km3 (0.023 cu mi). Source?
lateral levees and ogives may sound like jargon
Total SO2 flux from Better stick to "sulfur dioxide" for consistency

Eruptive history

5-6 earthquakes per 10 days Endash

Rest looks good to me. Congrats on another beautiful article, and best of luck for your RfA! Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:15, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Sainsf: Got most issues. The etymology does indeed only appear in the lead, not sure where it should be mentioned in the article text. I don't think there is a non-jargon way to spell "lateral levees and ogives". Where specifically does the endash go?Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 14:57, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

No problem just create an Etymology section at the top of the article after lead. Maybe try some links for the part that looks jargon to me? And replace the hyphen with the endash. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:27, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Sainsf: Created an own etymology and name section and explained "levee" a bit - "ogive" is already linked a section farther up. Hyphen to dash is done.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 17:38, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the changes. Promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:15, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

External links modified[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified one external link on Irruputuncu. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20140814173747/http://www.ine.gob.bo/publicaciones/visorPdf.aspx?Codigo=050902&tipo=1 to http://www.ine.gob.bo/publicaciones/visorPdf.aspx?Codigo=050902&tipo=1

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

Y An editor has reviewed this edit and fixed any errors that were found.

If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 10:02, 8 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA toolbox
Reviewing
Templates Criteria Instructions